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- Author: Craig Maloney < http://decafbad.net >
- License: Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 International (CC BY 4.0)
Scene 1
Panel 1: The corridors of a labyrinth. The walls are somewhat reflective.
Carrot wanders down the corridor
Panel 2: Carrot peeks around a corner. He looks pensive.
Panel 3: Close-up: Carrot sniffs the air.
Scene 2
Panel 4: Close-up: Carrot hears a sound. His ears perk up. It's a low, rumbling sound.
Panel 5: Carrot darts around a corner. The rumbling sound gets fainter.
Panel 6: Carrot cautiously moves through the maze
Panel 7: Carrot's ears perk up again. He hears the rumbling sound.
Panel 8: The rumbling sound gets closer. Carrot races through the maze.
Panel 9: Carrot sees a large reflective ball. He runs away from it.
Panel 10: The ball seems to follow Carrot as he frantically tries to avoid it.
Panel 11: Pull back: Carrot runs into a dead end.
Panel 12: Carrot turns around to see the ball is right behind him.
Scene 3
Panel 13: Carrot's eyes grow wider at the impending doom of being squished by the reflective ball
Panel 14: Carrot shuts his eyes. Offscreen we hear: Pepper: "Carrot!"
Panel 15: A flash. Magic! Spells!
Panel 16: Pull back into Pepper's house. We see a maze game on the floor with the maze that Carrot was wandering through. There is a drunk potion of shrinking near by. Pepper looks sternly at Carrot, who is now normal size. He looks defeated. She points a finger at him.
Pepper: "You know there's better ways to get the ball out of the maze"